el Arma Escrita

What... exactly are we supposed to review on this? To be frank, it's just you being harsh instead of constructive for five pages, or at least for the majority of ...

I will review first. :) I had come to the realization during basic training that I didn’t love Todd as much as I thought I did. And when I told ...

This seems very interesting! I really liked the beginning you have set up here, and I love the fact that the "demon" in your story isn't the negative character. I ...

Okay, I'll give this story its first critique! Something about her was pleasant, but James had no interest, she may be physically appealing but she was a witch. I feel ...

Overall I liked it - it was an intriguing idea. At the beginning I thought it was going to go a "Neverending Story" route, but you sent it in a ...